Saturday 2 June 2012


UPDATE 1st June 2012:


Good news for Bainton Gray fans! The author Miss Quin has been working on a special extended length mystery : 

The Poisoning of Jeremiah Ravensfoot
 
The work is now near completion. At the moment the original manuscript is still going through the editing process. 
 
This is a much longer story than previous ones, so with several rewrites to go, it'll be a while yet before it's ready for the Blog. 
 
Julia,  
Blog Editor (for Miss Quin)

Tuesday 5 April 2011

Bainton Gray and the Sweet Shop Murders - Part 2

Part Two - containing the solution to the whodunnit.


That evening Bainton Gray sat in his chair in front of the fire, thinking hard. This case was his most difficult. So many names kept running through his mind.... Gabriel... Ruth... Frances. Then there was Theodosia Francis..... and the chemist's clerk, Francis Lawrence.... Bainton jolted upright in the chair. 

He'd thought of something.....



Of course! Why didn't he see it before?

All he needed to do was to make some enquiries. He sent a note to Sergeant Wright. It wasn't long before they were both heading to the church to check the parish records.

Bainton began to explain to the sergeant what he’d discovered.  After Theodosia Crux had married Doctor Francis, the couple had had a son, Lawrence Francis. 

The real name of the chemist's clerk, Francis Lawrence, was in fact Lawrence Francis.

This meant that Lawrence Francis was Alice Smith’s half brother.  But what significance would this have on the case?  He wouldn’t inherit anything from her; she’d made no will.

But it did lead to intriguing possibilities over the Thorpe family.

Lawrence Francis had been courting Miss Thorpe. She was due to inherit property and money, after her father's death. But Gabriel Thorpe was now in jail and would probably hang for the murder of Alice Smith.

Two other people were also named in Gabriel Thorpe's will -  Alice Smith and Ruth Thorpe.

Poor Alice was now dead - poisoned.

Ruth Thorpe was still alive. What if someone wanted her dead as well?
Could someone be poisoning her?

Bainton had looked into the symptoms of arsenic poisoning. Apparently it could cause sleepiness, sickness, headaches and confusion. Ruth showed all of those symptoms. So who would have knowledge of such poisons? Which of his suspects would know how to slowly poison someone?

Well, the son of a doctor might. Lawrence Francis also worked at a chemists and had access to arsenic.

But how was Bainton going to prove that he was the poisoner?





It was Sunday. The Thorpe family always went to church on Sundays.

The trap was laid that afternoon. The Thorpes left for church, as always. They didn't know why Sergeant Wright wanted to stay behind in their house.

But they'd had to agree to it, because they couldn’t really refuse.

Sergeant Wright hid in the kitchen larder cupboard, leaving the door slightly ajar. There was just a small crack so that he could peer out. He waited tensely….

Then he heard a noise at the back door. A tall figure crept in. He stood with his back to Wright and slowly took down the jar of sugar dusted sweets. He unscrewed the lid. The suspense was unbearable.....

But what he did took Wright’s breath away.

The suspect didn’t tamper with the sweets in any way. He wrapped about three of them in some paper and put them in his pocket. Wright watched him leave, bewildered. What was happening here?

He told Bainton, who was shocked and surprised. The sweets were clearly not going to be eaten. The police had already had the sweets analysed by an expert in poisons. The sugar dusting on them was found to be powdered arsenic. So why was the killer removing the poisoned sweets?

There was only one thing left to do - question Lawrence Francis.





Lawrence Francis was calm as he was questioned. He explained all that he knew.

He admitted that he'd been courting Frances Thorpe, without her father’s knowledge.

But his mother, Theodosia, had found out. She'd told him that he mustn’t see Frances anymore. When pressed as to her reasons why, she'd confessed to him that the girl he loved was really his half sister. His mother said it wasn’t right somehow, it seemed incestuous.

His mother had been so upset and angry with him. Lawrence was told to end the relationship.

The next day he'd gone to see Frances Thorpe. He'd told her that he could no longer be her sweetheart. Frances had been very tearful when he'd told her. She'd wanted to know why.

Of course, he'd tried to avoid telling her - but she was wilful and insistent.  He didn't like seeing her upset. He'd been in turmoil as to what to do, as he didn't want to end the relationship.

In the end, he'd confided to Frances that she had a sister. She'd wanted to know all about her. Frances had said that she was just curious.

Was Alice like her? What were her favourite flowers? Her favourite sweets? Did she like reading books?  It had all seemed like innocent enough questions. But he didn’t know the answers, he'd never met Alice. So he'd asked his mother.

Theodosia knew a little about Alice; she'd had occasional contact with the Smith relatives over the years, more so since her husband's death. So she was able to tell him the answers to Frances' questions:

Alice's favourite flowers were poppies. Her favourite sweets were peppermint humbugs. No, she didn't have a favourite book. To be honest she couldn’t read or write very well.

Lawrence had told Frances these little bits of information about Alice that he'd gleaned from his mother.

But Theodosia had found out that he was still meeting Frances. She'd been adamant that he must refrain from any further contact with the Thorpe family. Reluctantly, Lawrence had stopped seeing Frances for a while, although he was heartbroken.

But not long after, Theodosia had died rather unexpectedly…



Lawrence continued telling Bainton what he knew.  He described how he'd resumed seeing Frances after his mother's death.

But then he'd learned that France's mother, Ruth Thorpe, was unwell. Lawrence had been puzzled over Frances’s lack of sympathy towards her mother. Her father was now in prison accused of murder. Even though he was protesting his innocence, he would probably be hung. But he'd observed that Frances didn't seem to be exhibiting any signs of loss or grief for her father either. She didn't even  talk of him. Mostly she just talked about material things - like money and possessions. He'd become quite suspicious about Frances' apparent lack of concern.

Lawrence Francis was a doctor's son. Like his father, he took an interest in medicine and illnesses. He'd decided to look into Ruth Thorpe's symptoms, to see if there was a cause or cure. But he hadn't been able to find out what was causing her to feel so ill.

One day, Frances had visited him when he was alone at the chemist's. She'd asked him for something and he'd gone to the back room of the shop to fetch it.

Some day’s later, he'd noticed that poisons had gone missing from the shop. He couldn’t really bring himself to believe that Frances had taken them. He didn't like to confront her about it so he'd decided to do some sleuthing. But when Bainton had asked him his surname, he'd got nervous about his real identity being found out.  So he'd said that his surname was Lawrence.

Bainton sat listening to Lawrence. He looked across at Sergeant Wright. The sergeant looked back at him. He knew that they were both thinking the same thing....




The Thorpe house was searched thoroughly.  In Frances Thorpe's room the police found arsenic hidden away inside a hatbox.

Frances was arrested and questioned. At the police station she proved to be utterly remorseless and cold hearted.

A while later, Sergeant Wright and Bainton strolled back from the police house. The Sergeant looked thoughtful for a while, before he turned to Bainton:

"You were wrong about Lawrence Francis”, he ventured.

Bainton nodded, quite happily.

“It’s a good thing! I wouldn’t like to become a man who thinks himself clever. By always being right, I‘d only develop a high opinion of myself.”

Wright read the note that Bainton had sent him again, then added that he had been right about Frances. Bainton, too, had been struck by her lack of empathy.

Bainton had also been suspicious about the note that had supposedly been written by Alice. He now realised that it had been conveniently placed so that it would be found by Penelope. He didn’t think that Mrs. Thorpe could have written it, as her hands shook.

There was another thing that had puzzled him.  If Mrs. Thorpe's food was being poisoned by Lawrence Francis, how could Lawrence be sure that Frances wouldn't eat it?

He thought of the sugar coated peppermints. On the outside they looked so sweet and tempting. But really they were dusted with pure poison.

The angelic looking Frances Thorpe was also like that....



Gabriel Thorpe had been released at last.

He was saddened by the loss of not only Alice, but now Frances, who was awaiting trial.

But his wife Ruth had been happy to be with him again. Her sourness had stemmed from jealously over what she had mistakenly believed was his love for Alice.

Her sickness had made her a bitter woman. But now she was feeling better, as she no longer had to endure the effects of the poison.

She could be happier now and comfort her grieving husband.



Back at the police station, Sgt. Wright and Bainton had finished discussing the case.

“Now then", said the sergeant, "you know I wouldn't let you go to all this trouble for nothing. It's only right that you should be rewarded. So I was thinking of a little something in return for your help.”

Bainton noticed the jar of Thorpe's Sarsaparilla Drops on the cupboard behind Sgt. Wright's desk. He eyed them with suspicion.





He looked at the sergeant with mild amusement. Was this some sort of joke?

"Any sweets are simply out of the question", he replied.

"Oh no, I didn't mean those!" said the sergeant hastily, seeing Bainton's look of indignation. "Those are from Thorpe's shop. We were testing some of the other sweets for arsenic as well. One of the staff must have left them there."

"Well, in that case", said Bainton, somewhat relieved, "I wouldn’t say no to a drink at The Crown and Oak!"




The End








Notes by the Author:
 
This story was inspired by the real life Bradford Sweet Poisonings. In the 19th century it was common to adulterate foodstuffs by adding cheap substances. Calcium sulphate was added to peppermints. In 1858, a sweet maker in Bradford sent somebody to obtain some from a druggist. However, by mistake, the druggist's assistant picked up some arsenic, thinking it was calcium sulphate. The arsenic was added to the sweets. As a result 200 people became seriously ill and 20 died.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bradford_sweets_poisoning

The characters:

Gabriel -  I chose this name because it conveys someone who is angelic. He was an innocent man.

Ruth - the name Ruth means pain. It was appropiate because she was ill and she was in pain.


Saturday 12 March 2011

Bainton Gray and the Secret of Tryphena Salt - Part 2

It was only in Tryphena’s behaviour did Bainton ever guess...

He kept asking himself why it was that if Tryphena saw someone at the shop window,  why hadn't he seen them too? Surely no-one could have disappeared that quickly?


Bainton weighed up the facts. Perhaps if he delved into the story of Tryphena’s brother's mysterious death, he would be able to understand more?

Cordelia and her aunt knew the family. So Bainton paid a call to his intended. He hoped they had the answers he needed.

They told him what they knew about David and how he'd been very much like his sister. They were both of the opinion that he'd been prone to moodswings.  Apparently his behaviour could be most unbecoming at times. He often appeared sad and at times slumped into fits of melancholia. They knew of several rather peculiar outbursts. His death had been very odd, they said. They'd heard that the gun was with him when he died.

There was even talk at the time that he may have taken his own life. But his mother had insisted to the police that his demeanour had been cheerful that fateful day.




Bainton went to see Mary Salt. A maid showed him into the sitting room.

Mary sat there, shrouded in jet black mourning clothes, a bible in her hand. She told Bainton that her daughter had been buried within the last week. She said that there was a small plot in the churchyard which the Salt family owned. Tryphena had been laid to rest there. It had been so important, she stressed,  to have her buried with her brother and family.



Bainton sensed there was something in Mary's manner that told him she was holding something back. He began to ask questions:

 “Your daughter told me that she was followed wherever she went. But I saw no-one..."

Mary sat up straight; she shook her head. Then she hid her face with a lace handkerchief. She was so distraught that she could only utter one word:

 “CHARLES...!"

Bainton went quiet. He waited until Mary's sobs subsided.

Then he responded: “Charles couldn't have known every place that Try visited. Besides, he was away in London part of the time, on business. He couldn’t possibly follow her everywhere.”

He continued: “David died in a way that made people think something was amiss. Did Try miss him? Because you were in mourning dress for him, but she wasn‘t.”

Mary replied in a weary voice. “Try loved her brother dearly, but she said she didn’t need to wear black to show her pain. She wasn’t one to follow the conventions of society".

Bainton wasn't getting very far. He mentioned Charles again, but Mary’s face hardened.

He would have to persist if he was to find out the truth:

“Charles is a handsome fellow. But I wouldn’t have thought stabbing was in his nature. I know he’s sad over Try’s death, but he's not heartbroken. Not like a man in the grip of love".

Mary didn't answer, so Bainton resumed his questioning:

"He also said that he couldn’t see Try sitting in the gazebo when he looked outside - and I believe him. He was only outside for a minute, not long enough to walk to the gazebo.”

At that, Mary screamed suddenly: “STOP!   No more, Mr Gray, please! "

She pointed to the door, before ordering: "PLEASE LEAVE!”




But Bainton didn't leave. Instead, he knelt down before her and gazed into her eyes. Mary looked at him in surprise, startled by this sudden change in him.

"Please, Mrs. Salt", he begged. "Try asked me for help. I feel I’ve failed her....” Bainton’s voice shook then, as he thought of Tryphena’s haunted face.

Mary looked at him and saw the sadness in his grey eyes. She looked away, she couldn’t bear to meet his gaze.

Bainton pulled himself together and continued:

“When you went outside on that fateful night, you came back. But after that, your actions were strange. You kept your fan in front of your face. Why hide your face? You weren’t hiding from a person. So what else could you hide, except your feelings? At a social gathering you're expected to look happy. But to want to hide your features like that must mean you were feeling the opposite. Is that because you'd found your daughter dead?"

Mary stared at him, speechless. But something about the look in her eyes told Bainton he was getting nearer to the truth. He carried on:

"I think she was lying dead on the gazebo floor, which is why Charles couldn’t see her from the house. When you came back indoors, you covered your face to hide your grief. But you couldn't tell anyone she was dead....."

He paused, watching for her reaction, before continuing:

"I don’t think you had the strength to stab her, I noticed that day in the hat shop that your hands are weak. I'm sure that you didn't do it.....The knife… you could have eased the knife out of her body. You could have hidden that up your long sleeves. When I touched Try's cheek she was deathly cold. I think she'd been dead for such a length of time, that neither you nor Charles could have killed her while I was there".

He studied Mary's tear-stained face. "What was in that letter Mrs Salt? I have to know. Please, please tell me?"


Mary didn't answer. She just lowered her head.

“So, you'd rather have the man your daughter loved hang for this?” asked Bainton.

Mary looked at him again. She saw the pain in his eyes. Overcome with emotion, she suddenly found her burden too much to bear. She knew that he'd guessed her secret. She would have to tell him what she knew.

She confessed that the letter she'd found next to Try's body was a goodbye letter. The note had said that she couldn’t carry on with her life. She’d been quoting Tennyson’s Maud several times recently, a poem about death, funerals and religion.  It was an odd thing to do. The strange, disordered Maud, talking of death over and over. But then, Tryphena’s mind worked in strange ways.



Try believed she was being followed wherever she went, it was unbearable.

The letter went on to say that she'd always thought Charles was a good person. But now she knew he didn't love her. She'd discovered that he had a secret life. She'd found out how he spent his time in London; and it had been shocking.

She’d recently lost her only brother David. They'd been close. She missed him so much.  He was her equal and he understood her.

Try liked Bainton, but felt guilty that he had come into her life.  She thought that she only brought misery to people, she didn't want to ruin his life.

Her suicide note had ended with goodbye.


Mary told Bainton she’d give her soul for her children to be in Heaven. She'd destroyed the letter, the same as she'd done with her son David’s farewell note.

Bainton summed up the facts: “So a verdict of suicide would have meant she’d be buried in unconsecrated ground. Away from her family and from God. I understand the pain this brings you. But Tryphena has now been buried, so she will remain there at peace".

"You've done all you can for your daughter. But there's one more thing you must do. Try wouldn’t want Charles to hang, he's an innocent man. Do you think that she'd be able to rest in her grave if that happens?"

Mary drew herself up. Her face was grim but she was prepared to face the consequences.



Bainton felt saddened at the conclusion of these events. But it taught him that life was far too short. He realised how deep his feelings were for Miss Fortescue.

So he mustered the courage to ask for Cordelia’s hand in marriage.
His proposal was accepted.

The Gray, Fortsecue and Stow families gathered together to celebrate the engagement. Bainton even managed to sneak Cordelia away from her chaperone for a short time!

At last, Bainton and Cordelia were alone. As they embraced under the starry sky, Bainton felt elated.

* * *

Later on, Bainton gallantly agreed to make Cordelia's Aunt Jane a hat. Not just any hat, but the finest one ever.....



The End.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *





Miss Quin's Explanatory Notes On The Story

The idea for this story was inspired by a historical account about religious beliefs in England during the Victorian era. The story was partly based on Elizabeth Siddal's death. Lizzie was married to the artist, Dante Gabriel Rossetti. She was an artists model and is featured in a famous painting called Ophelia by Millais.


"Ophelia" - by Millais

She's thought to have taken an overdose of laudanum which killed her. But her family insisted it was an accident, because they wanted her buried in the churchyard.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elizabeth_Siddal

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Tryphena was suffering from a psychiatric illness. Her tantrum in the shop and over excitement at Bainton's visits were caused by mood swings.  She thought that she was being followed everywhere, but this was a classic symptom of paranoid delusion - there really wasn't anyone there. The story also suggests that her brother David had the same illness.

Tennyson's Maud

If a letter's reference to a poem is important enough to burn, then as you might guess, it has some bearing on the plot. But poetry is something very individual, why a particular person is drawn to a poem is part of who they are.


"Maud" is a very odd poem, the speaker is in a state of terrible emotional confusion. The story is about death, funerals and religion.
The line“For one that will never be mine” - she’s thinking of Charles.
“A cry for a brother’s blood, it will ring in my heart and my ears till I die” Unlike the poem, Try’s brother wasn’t killed by another, but his death had caused her own distressed state of mind.
“We are not worthy to live.” refers to how she feels.
The poem ends with “bury me, bury me”. 

The Clues

  • The maid - in the story she said that Try had been in the kitchen. That was a clue. The upper classes rarely visited kitchens. If they did so, that was because they had a good reason to be there. Try went into the kitchen and took a knife to kill herself.


  • The cat named McGuffin was just that, a McGuffin. It wasn't really a clue. Just a reference to a false clue with no meaning.


  • Gun cleaning accidents - how many people have actually died as a result of cleaning a gun? It’s often a cover up for murder or suicide.  There was a clue to David's suicide there. Why would you clean a loaded gun? Plus, if you have servants, why clean things yourself? 


  • The fan - why would someone cover their face? That was a clue too. Because if you can’t see them, you can’t see how they feel.

  • The Green Carnation - which Charles Browne wore. In Victorian times this was a symbol worn by homosexual men.

Wednesday 9 March 2011

Bainton Gray and the Churchyard Mystery - Part 2




Bainton's shop had flourished so much, that he could afford to pay others to attend the shop for him. He had more time, which he spent calling on Cordelia.

Or reading.

He took a rather secret, guilty pleasure in reading his sister's Gothic novels. Graveyards, castles, hidden passageways, and wicked men attempting to seduce innocent women. It was a world away from the life that Bainton knew.

But now he was spending his time making seemingly casual inquiries into whether anyone in the town could have disappeared. He'd started with the Crown and Oak public house.

"Yes", said Bet, who worked at the bar, in answer to Bainton's query. There had been a man who'd disappeared mysteriously. One of their guests, who'd stayed at the pub not so long ago. His name was, rather oddly, Mr Beau Titus. He was a wealthy wine merchant. She recalled that he was a charming, smartly dressed gentleman. Always wore a silk top hat. She remembered that he’d played cards one evening with Bainton's cousin, Stephen. Although they'd claimed it wasn’t for money, Stephen had accused Beau of cheating. There'd been a bit of an argument between them.

But her husband, the landlord Bert Smith, interrupted the conversation. He growled in his hoarse voice that Mr Titus was “ a dandy" and referred to him as "him with his too smart hair and clothes!"

Bainton got the impression Bert strongly disliked him. He claimed that Mr Titus had upped and left one night, without paying his bill!

How mysterious. Why would someone who was wealthy not settle their bill before leaving?

Did Bert Smith know something?

So was it a murder? If not, why the trick?

If it was a crime, who was the victim?
What was the motive?


* * * * * * * * * *



Bainton was going for his morning constitution. Just then, he saw his cousin Stephen leaving Adam’s cottage. Stephen saw Bainton. He started, then looked rather furtive.

“Visiting Adam again, eh? What high jinks are you two planning now?” enquired Bainton.

Stephen smiled rather hesitantly, but evaded the question.

Later on, Bainton went for a drink in the Crown and Oak. The landlord’s wife looked up and gave Bainton a big smile. He hastily averted his eyes, after seeing the dark look on Bert Smith's face. Bainton pondered this. If this Mr Titus was so attractive, could Bert have been jealous of him too?

He looked around and to his surprise saw Adam drinking in the corner. So who had Stephen been visiting?
He doubted Stephen would have been visiting Adam’s formidable maiden aunt. Could it be that his cottage was actually empty? Bainton wondered whether to go over and talk to him, but decided it would look odd. Shop owners didn’t normally mingle with manual workers; he had his reputation to think about.

He waited until Bert had gone down to the cellar, then decided to ask his wife Bet.

Bainton casually talked to her about his sister’s wedding plans, which Bet seemed quite interested in. But she didn’t even know about the wedding, despite the fact that Stephen spent a lot of time in there.

Bainton asked about the row his cousin had had with Mr Titus, over the game of cards. Bet replied that she thought it was more likely Stephen was sour over Mr Titus courting Adam's sister Peggy these past few months.

* * * * * * * * * *


That night Bainton lay in bed. He'd read a few chapters of a Gothic novel, which turned out to be too ridiculous for words. Then he drifted off to sleep.....

He dreamt that he saw a mad monk, (who was really a vicar in disguise), poisoned wine, playing cards..... a crypt with a fallen maiden named Peggy locked away inside, her outraged relatives....... and finally - a trapdoor.....

Bainton awoke with a start.

What a strange dream! Yet it gave him an idea.

Oh, if only there was proof!





It was evening. Adam was working in the graveyard, clearing some bushes. To his horror, he looked down and saw the body of a man. It was half hidden by a bush. The dead gentleman was lying face down, blood on his hair, his top hat askew. Then a look of dread appeared on Adam's face.

He stared at the finely made top hat with disbelief, for it was a hat that he knew he'd seen before. It had once belonged to his enemy. But he'd killed the man weeks ago - and buried him! Why was his enemy's body lying there? Had it come back from the grave to haunt him? He cried out in angst:

“Titus! Leave me be! It was an accident.... I swear… I didn’t intend to kill you. Don‘t haunt me.. "

"Am I going mad? ” he sobbed.

But as he sank to his knees in anguish, the “corpse” slowly got up - and turned to face him. It was Bainton Gray!

“That’s a confession I think, isn’t it, Constable?” asked Bainton calmly.

Constable Wright emerged from his hiding place behind the cypress tree.

Adam made as if to bolt, but was promptly arrested.

* * * * * * * * * *


Later that evening, Bainton summed up how he'd solved the crime:

He'd thought about the body in the churchyard. Whether it was fake or real, there would have been blood or something similar. The vicar or Adam must have seen it.

Another thing that stood out for Bainton, he said, was the black top hat that Adam wore. It was too fine for a poor man like him. Bainton certainly knew about hats!

Plus the idea of someone else telling Adam to pretend to be a dead body was odd. Who would take the word of an unknown person seriously? How would Adam have known the exact location to lie in - unless he'd known about the first body?

Bainton knew that the vicar must be involved, because of the kneeler he'd seen which had red blood stains. But he knew there had to be someone else, because when he'd heard the footsteps echoing in the church,  the vicar had been talking to Stephen. They were at the other end of the building to the footsteps, so it couldn't have been them.

Another point: if there was a John Smith who'd died, why had no one else mentioned his absence?

Constable Wright and Bainton checked the church and their suspicions were confirmed.



Adam’s confession:


Mr. Titus had promised Peggy marriage, but as soon as she'd told him of her plight, he'd abandoned her.

He'd told her that he was due to go away to the city, she'd never find him there. In the meantime he'd booked into the village pub to wait until the day when the next carriage cab left for London.

Poor Peggy had been left in the lurch. She'd been too ashamed to tell her maiden Aunt, so she'd confided to Adam about her situation.

Adam was sickened to hear how Titus had treated his sister. He'd tried to devise a plan to help Peggy. When Peggy had told him that Beau Titus was staying in the village inn, he'd had an idea.

Adam had known for many years that the pub had a hidden passageway. He'd heard tales passed down in his family about it. He'd been told that there was a hidden trapdoor in the cellar. Stone steps led down from this trapdoor to an opening, beyond which was a smuggler's tunnel which led to the church. Long ago, smugglers hid barrels taken from boats, and then hid them in the nearby church. The clergy were willing helpers, as they made a tidy profit.

Adam had been told the location of the entrance inside the church. It was in the oldest part. It looked almost like a priest hole, but it had steps going downwards. The passage led into the cellar of the Crown and Oak. The hatch hadn’t been sealed. The current owners were unaware of it.

He'd entered Mr. Titus’s room, then stolen money and a gold ring. His plan was to try and raise enough cash for Peggy to go away, abort the child and return without anyone knowing.

But his plan had gone wrong......



Saturday 5 March 2011

Bainton Gray and the Mystery Of Barnaby Hall - Part 2

The Murderer Is Revealed




Bainton thought about the upper floors and the objects he’d seen there. He recalled that there was one item that stood out in his mind - the mannequin. Being a milliner, he regularly looked at the fashion house windows. He often discussed fashions with his female clients, as it helped him to make sales. But the mannequin upstairs was bare, which was most odd. He wasn't in the habit of seeing undressed mannequins. He tried to picture what it would have looked like wearing Clementia’s clothes. But if the room had been left untouched since her death, why was the mannequin bare? Perhaps Annie knew why that was?

Bainton went out into the corridor to look for Annie. She was dusting the bannisters nearby. Seeing him approach, she smiled coyly at him. Once again he felt nervous in her presence. He found himself staring at her small hands as she dusted. It was then that he noticed something. She was wearing a gold ring. A large gemstone that sparkled as she moved had caught his eye. Bainton knew at once that it must have been expensive. Certainly not the sort of thing to wear when scrubbing floors.

“Annie, that ring you're wearing?" asked Bainton."It's such a beautiful ring. I'd like to buy one like that for my sister. Would you mind if I looked at it? I have a good knowledge of gems. I'd be most interested to see which jeweller made it, by examining the maker's mark".

Annie flashed him a smile. "Right you are, Sir!" She took off her ring and held it out on her upturned palm towards him to examine it. It was then that Bainton noticed how pale and delicate her hands were.

"Annie, you told me that you'd been scrubbing floors all morning. But you're hands are pale; they're not red as they would be from cleaning." Annie hurriedly withdrew her hands.

Just then, the valet, Mr. Phoenix, came downstairs. He walked past them carrying a cloth and a tin of boot polish. As he entered the kitchen, he and Mrs. Merryfoot exchanged sideways glances at each other.

Bainton paused, and rubbed his chin whilst trying to think. Annie picked up her duster and headed towards the kitchen. Bainton followed her.

"And there's another thing...." he continued.  "We've only just been introduced. Already you're trusting me with an expensive ring. How can you be so easily charmed by me, a complete stranger?” Annie looked embarassed and turned away. But Bainton knew by her reaction that she had lied. She had to be involved in this murder.

The woman at the window had been real, hadn't she? Bainton tried to remember her hands tapping against the glass. In his mind he pictured her white hands and the long dark hair. Bainton stared at Annie. She was still looking frightened. She stole a quick, nervous glance towards Mr Phoenix. The valet however, looked quite calm. Bainton looked him up and down, whilst thoughts raced through his mind.  His eyes focused on the brightly polished buttons of the valet's stylish jacket.

Bainton started, as a flashback came to his mind. He could remember a similar coloured jacket, on the man at the window. But the mystery man's head had been obscured by the curtain. The mannequin came into his mind once more. Then the truth dawned! But he’d try a test first.

“Mr Phoenix, when I smelt the roses, there were two types - red or yellow, which colour rose did I smell?” The valet looked uneasy and didn't answer. He glanced towards Annie, as if looking for the answer. Bainton knew then that he was getting nearer to the truth…




“I believe that it was you Annie, at the window, dressed as Lady Clementia. You drew attention to the windows, so that I’d see what looked like Mr Phoenix standing at the window.” But it wasn’t Phoenix. You'd dressed the mannequin in the valet’s spare clothes to make it look like he wasn’t downstairs at the time of the murder."

Annie didn't reply, but her eyes became tearful and she bowed her head. Mrs. Merryfoot looked shocked.  She shook her head in disbelief and clasped her hands to her mouth.

Bainton turned his attention to the valet. "So, it was you, Mr Phoenix, who killed Lady Castledine!”

Phoenix looked horrified, he started to shake. Suddenly, he jumped up and ran towards the door. Bainton acted quickly; he grabbed a kitchen knife from the table and ran after him. A police constable also gave chase. They were followed by Holt the gardener.

Catching up with the valet in the garden, the three of them managed to apprehend the valet. Holding him down, Bainton waved the knife in front of his face. Seeing the sharp glint of the blade, Phoenix became submissive and recoiled in fear. Grasping Phoenix by the collar, the policeman then marched him back towards the kitchen.

“Sit down,” ordered the policeman, pushing the valet towards an empty chair. “You know very well that you've committed a heinous crime! You may as well tell us why you did it!”


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Some time later, after numerous attempts by the police to extract a confession, the valet reluctantly began his story…

“For the past year I’ve had gambling debts. I couldn’t pay them, so I stole jewellery from Lady Clementia. I was in her room when she caught me holding her necklace. She said she'd tell her father when he got back. I knew he'd dismiss me. My name would be blackened and I’d never work again. I couldn’t risk ending up a pauper in the workhouse, so I tampered with her sleeping draught.

Months later, I was racked with guilt over her murder. I used to walk around in her room upstairs. One day Lady Alethia Castledine caught me. She thought I was going mad. I didn’t want to be sent to an asylum either, so she had to die like her twin.

I started courting Annie. I told her that I’d seen Clementia’s ghost walking around upstairs. That girl is so stupid, I knew she'd gossip and start a rumour about a ghost. Then I talked her into my plan. I knew she'd do anything for me. All I had to do was get her to provide an alibi for myself.  Of course, she's so simple, she never even realised that she didn’t have one for herself!

I also charmed Mrs. Merryfoot. I told her it would be best to keep our relationship secret. If the Butler found out he would go and tell the Master, then I'd lose my job.  I promised her that I’d buy her a new hat. It was me who suggested she should arrange for a milliner to visit. I had it worked out that you would be here at 2 o'clock to see what looked like myself at the front window. I told her that the Master would be out, so if the milliner arrived at the front, then it would be more impressive.

I gave her the money for the hat and told her to choose one. But really I'd stolen the money from the Master, when he went to his Gentleman's Club. He'd been drinking with friends and thought he'd lost it in the Club".

He looked up at Bainton. "I couldn’t risk you, Mr Gray, coming around the back of the house; the gardener was working there. I didn’t want him to have an alibi."

His eyes darted towards Holt, who angrily glowered back at him from the far corner.

"What about the housekeeper?" demanded the policeman. "What was her role in all this?"

"Mrs Merryfoot didn’t know about the murders", replied the valet. "I even secretly proposed to her this morning." He laughed derisively at his own cunning. "She was so excitable and flustered," he added scornfully.

"I murdered Lady Alethia, then I went into the passage way and scrubbed the floors, I had to make it sound like Annie was working. I did that while Annie was upstairs, taking off Lady Clementia’s outfit and putting her own clothes back on. She then undressed the mannequin and put my spare jacket in an unused cupboard.



She came downstairs and whispered to me what she had seen whilst looking through the window. She told me you were strolling near the rosebeds. But the wretched girl didn’t tell me what colour rose you chose to smell!" He thumped his fist on the table with anger. "I came so close to getting away with it!”


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Soon after, Lord and Lady Castledine returned.  The master of the house was heartbroken to learn that both daughters had been murdered. But on hearing that Bainton had stopped the valet from running away, he rewarded him handsomely for catching the killer.  Bainton now had enough money to purchase his very own hat shop!

As Bainton was leaving, he turned to look at Barnaby Hall for one last time. He remembered how he thought it had looked creepy when he first saw it. As his eyes wandered upwards, remembering the pale faced woman at the second floor window, he thought he saw two identical young women gazing back at him. Startled, he blinked; it had been quite an eventful day. Was his mind playing tricks on him?

When he looked again, they'd vanished from sight. Bainton promptly picked up his hat boxes and walked down the long path. This time he didn't stop to look back. He knew he would never see them again.....




The End

Bainton Gray and the Hat Shop Mystery - Part 2

 

 

Part Two  (Contains the Solution to the Whodunnit)



Bainton sat down on the stool in the hat shop. The local police constable had arrived. He'd asked lots of questions. But the police were nowhere near solving the theft.

Bainton sighed and ran his hands through his thick wavy hair. His poor sister Penelope was distraught that her hard work had been taken away. They tried to tell themselves it was just a hat. But then again, it was such an expensive one. One that could have made them a good profit. The truth was, they'd really needed the money from the sale for the advertising.

Bainton ran over the names of people who had motives.

He didn’t know why Peter had given him such evil looks. He’d only been chatting politely with Cordelia, even though she was rather lovely.

Bainton shook himself, he needed to think clearly! Could Cordelia have been so secretly offended by his remark about her complexion, that she had taken the hat? But how? He didn't think that she had been alone in the shop. Unless Penelope had her back turned?

“Penelope, did you turn your back when Cordelia and Peter came in?” But his sister replied no,  she'd kept an eye on both of them. They were ruled out.

Mr. Stone had been furious with Bainton for kicking him. Bainton rubbed his chin regretfully. Perhaps he had acted rashly, but he was so angered to see an animal ill treated. Yet Mr. Stone had come into the shop.

Bainton looked at the handwriting. With a feeling of dread, he thought he recognised it. It looked rather like Mara’s! Yet when he examined it closer,  there were differences. But how could it be Mara that had taken the hat? He'd seen her leave the shop empty handed.

Bainton thought about the notes left under the door. Could there have been other notes, perhaps ones that he didn’t know about? May be someone else had discovered them? What if Mr. Stone had found them? 

It came to him soon, something he remembered….




Bainton suddenly realised that  it couldn't have been Mr. Stone.

Because no-one could enter without the door chime ringing.

So Mr. Stone couldn't have entered the shop while they were out the back, without being heard.

Peter had no way of taking it, nor did Cordelia. They would have been seen by Penelope.

And he knew that Mara had left empty-handed.

That only left one other person - Penelope. Could she have made the substituted hat?

It pained him to even consider his sister as a suspect, but he had to do so. For months he had spent his days working with her. He'd spent many evenings with her, planning the display and designing the hats. He doubted that she would have had the spare time to make one. But ordering the items for the hats was his job. He calculated that she simply wouldn’t have had enough materials left over to make an extra hat.

No, he concluded, it couldn't have been Penelope.

So it must have been Mara?

Bainton thought about when she'd been in the shop that day. Yes, she had talked for a while. He'd had his back turned. For how long?  It was always the same, whenever he did something she didn’t like. She’d use cruel words -  like arrows that struck deeply. Bainton always turned away from her. Sometimes he felt he had to hide his exasperated expression, whenever she was being so shrewish yet again!


He needed to find out if his instinct was correct.


He set off to her small cottage, where she lived alone. He knew the door would most likely be open. Her cottage was surrounded by trees, so he hid behind one of them. He could see Mara now, watering her flowers in her front garden. So Bainton took off round the back. He had to work quickly.

He opened the back door. If she did have the hat, it would be in her bedroom. So he crept quietly up the stairs and prayed that she’d be out in the garden for a while. He didn’t know which was her room, so he peeked into the first one that he came to. It turned out that it was her bedroom.

Where could the hat be? He thought for a minute. His sister always kept her hats in her wardrobe. So he opened the wardrobe door and peeped inside. Bainton spotted a hat box and eased open the lid.

He could not believe his eyes. There, before him, was the hat that had been stolen!

Bainton decided that it was time to leave.  But then, to his horror, he heard footsteps coming up the stairs! 




Thinking quickly, he crammed the hat and himself into the wardrobe and closed the door. He stood as still as possible and thought over and over again “don’t open the wardrobe”.

But his nightmare came true and the door was opened. Mara stood there before him in complete shock.

Bainton had to think quickly.

“Oh, hello Mara!   Don't be so alarmed...... I’m here for a reason...... I wanted to surprise you!"

He continued: "You see, I was thinking of you and me and the future. Well, I've changed my mind. I want to marry you!”

Mara looked astonished, but then a delighted smile appeared on her face. She gazed at him adoringly.
Mara thought to herself, "What does it matter about revenge now? Bainton loves me!" She was pleased to have him here. Mara threw her arms around him.

Bainton really was trapped now. He needed to plan his next move.

He remembered that Mara had certain fixations about some things. Apparitions was one of them.  She'd been so interested in the story he'd told her about seeing ghosts at Barnaby Hall. She was also quite superstitious. Knowing that Mara was so gullible where anything supernatural was concerned gave him an idea.

“Mara, I noticed there's an odd pattern in the wood in your wardrobe door. It's shaped rather like a religious figure. I swear it’s an omen!"

She peered inside, but declared that she couldn't see anything.

“No Mara, it only shows when you're inside the wardrobe, you have to close the doors slightly. You can only see it in a certain light. It’s quite eerie, have a look darling. Perhaps it's a sign that we should get married?"  

Mara clambered inside. Bainton quickly slammed the doors shut and turned the key!

She began hammering on the doors, calling his name and cursing. But Bainton was out of the door and heading back to town to find the local bobby.

He found Constable Wright and told him that he'd found the thief at last.

He took the constable back to Mara's cottage. Mara was still there, of  course, locked inside the wardrobe.  When she was let out, she shrieked such unlady like insults at Bainton, that the constable believed she should be arrested for using offensive language!

The evidence was there for the constable to see, so Mara had no choice but to confess.




Later that evening, Bainton had a lot to tell Penelope:

 
Mara had done it all for revenge. She couldn’t accept that he'd broken off their engagement. She used to peer through the shop window. She'd seen Penelope working on that special hat, and she'd overheard them talking about it. Then she'd hatched a plan to get her own back by stealing the hat.

 
Mara knew about hats, after years of courtship with Bainton. It hadn't been too difficult to make a substitute..... She wasn’t sure that she could pull it off, but it would be worth it. In her bitter state of mind she never really considered the consequences of getting caught.

She had planned to sneak in, but realised that she’d be caught by the door chime. So instead, she wore a small close fitting hat over her head, which she planned to substitute for the expensive hat in the window. She'd simply placed her much larger hat over the top of it to conceal it.

Then she'd gone to the shop. Knowing Bainton had such a soft spot for ladies, she'd deliberately used words that she knew would pain him. She knew that being sensitive, he would look away.

As soon as Bainton had turned away, wracked with emotion, she'd seized that brief moment whilst his back was turned to carry out the switch. She'd quickly taken off her huge hat, placed the substitute one on the stand, and put the really expensive one from the window on her head. Then she'd quickly covered it with her large hat. She was so pleased with herself.

She'd written the note beforehand;  altering her writing slightly. Her plan was to frame Penelope, so she'd tried to copy her handwriting. Who could substitute a hat so easily…but Penelope?

The stolen hat was returned and took pride of place in the window display. It wasn't there long before it was purchased by Cordelia. She and her older sister Portia started visiting his shop regularly after that. But her stern looking fiance, Peter, was nowhere to be seen.

When Bainton enquired after him, Cordelia explained that Peter was no longer her fiance. She'd found him too possessive and jealous.

Bainton told her he knew exactly how that felt! 




The End.



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